Thursday, July 9, 2009

Illusions Mini Excerpt


She looked at herself in the mirror. Specks of dried blood spattered her hands.

Greasy hair and frightened eyes – what a combo.

9 comments:

sherrinda said...

Woah! That is intriguing, to say the least! ;)

Robyn Campbell said...

Great visual. :)

Karen Amanda Hooper said...

eewww blood. I pass out at blood. Don't worry though, I made it through that excerpt. ;)

Jamie D. said...

Very intriguing - wonderful imagery!

B.J. Anderson said...

That's scary! And interesting!

Tess said...

I hope she's ok...must.turn.page.

Lady Glamis said...

I'm so interested in your story from everything I've read so far!

Lazy Writer said...

Definitely makes me want to read more!

Amy Allgeyer Cook said...

Hi Joyce--
Just wanted to thank you for your support of 826 Valencia! It's a great organization and I really appreciate your click to help with my donation!
Nice blog! I look forward to reading more about your writing! :)
-Amy