Thursday, June 25, 2009

Illusions Mini Excerpt


Kate grabbed the rock, felt it dig into her palm, and felt a rush of alertness from the pain. She threw the rock and swung herself around, knocking the legs out from under the attacker. She lurched to her feet an instant before he did.

4 comments:

B.J. Anderson said...

Dun, dun, dun!! Very exciting!

Lady Glamis said...

Exciting, yes!!!! I thought it was slowed down by the "felts" though... Still, I'd love to read the rest of this scene. :D

Robyn said...

Very nice! Alertness made me stumble a bit. Just because it's hard to read. But great writing there! Thanks for sharing. :)

Sarah Jensen said...

Another good one.
I need to read this again!
Or book two!!!!