Dun, dun, dun!! Very exciting!
Exciting, yes!!!! I thought it was slowed down by the "felts" though... Still, I'd love to read the rest of this scene. :D
Very nice! Alertness made me stumble a bit. Just because it's hard to read. But great writing there! Thanks for sharing. :)
Another good one.I need to read this again!Or book two!!!!
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