Joyce Wolfley: Illusions Mini Excerpt

Thursday, June 11, 2009

The fingers of vertigo tickled, teased. Kate carefully took two steps backwards. Away from the cliff.

Michelle D. Argyle said...: Oh, this is great! I love the personification of vertigo. And I love the last sentence, how it is a separate sentence to draw attention to itself. It works really well. Great job!

I want to read your book. :); June 11, 2009 at 6:54 AM
B.J. Anderson said...: OooOOOooo. I got shivers, because I'm terrified of heights!; June 11, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Danyelle L. said...: Very nice. It feels like a conversation. :D; June 11, 2009 at 11:49 AM
kah said...: ooooooh nice. I'm an adrenaline junkie so I wanted her to step forward but it gave me that "woo hoo" feeling when I read it. :); June 12, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Robyn Campbell said...: Love this excerpt. Reads so smooth. It made me feel like I was watching Kate. :); June 12, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Sarah Jensen said...: Man, I simply love this book!; June 13, 2009 at 10:39 PM
Angela Ackerman said...: Great tension in those few lines!; June 16, 2009 at 9:03 AM