It hurt to breathe. It hurt to move. It hurt to think about breathing or moving.
I love the picture you draw in my mind with those words. You have an award over at my blog. :)
OooOOOooo. Love it! Got some chills going from reading it.
I'm not sure I like this... I think it might possibly be better in context and knowing the POV character it's coming from. Wow, I feel bad not loving it. Sorry. :( I guess I like description. I often have too much of it in my books. :S
By the way, I do love your cover for the book. Did you make that?
Sounds like my last Saturday.
Man, I love this story!:)
It's funny this should be the excerpt. Breathing and moving do hurt right now. :$
I just wanted to let you know that I nominated your blog today for an award! Thanks for such an outstanding blog! Stop by my blog to pick up the award!
All the best with your novel. It is very nice to meet you.Regards,Valerie
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