Joyce Wolfley: Illusions Mini Excerpt

Thursday, May 28, 2009

It hurt to breathe. It hurt to move. It hurt to think about breathing or moving.

Robyn Campbell said...: I love the picture you draw in my mind with those words.

You have an award over at my blog. :); May 28, 2009 at 7:49 AM
B.J. Anderson said...: OooOOOooo. Love it! Got some chills going from reading it.; May 28, 2009 at 8:17 AM
Michelle D. Argyle said...: I'm not sure I like this... I think it might possibly be better in context and knowing the POV character it's coming from. Wow, I feel bad not loving it. Sorry. :( I guess I like description. I often have too much of it in my books. :S; May 28, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Michelle D. Argyle said...: By the way, I do love your cover for the book. Did you make that?; May 28, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Tana said...: Sounds like my last Saturday.; May 28, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Sarah Jensen said...: Man, I love this story!
:); May 28, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Danyelle L. said...: It's funny this should be the excerpt. Breathing and moving do hurt right now. :$; May 28, 2009 at 3:41 PM
K said...: I just wanted to let you know that I nominated your blog today for an award! Thanks for such an outstanding blog! Stop by my blog to pick up the award!; May 30, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Culture Served Raw said...: All the best with your novel. It is very nice to meet you.

Regards,
Valerie; May 31, 2009 at 9:19 PM