Thursday, May 28, 2009

Illusions Mini Excerpt

It hurt to breathe. It hurt to move. It hurt to think about breathing or moving.

9 comments:

Robyn said...

I love the picture you draw in my mind with those words.

You have an award over at my blog. :)

B.J. Anderson said...

OooOOOooo. Love it! Got some chills going from reading it.

Lady Glamis said...

I'm not sure I like this... I think it might possibly be better in context and knowing the POV character it's coming from. Wow, I feel bad not loving it. Sorry. :( I guess I like description. I often have too much of it in my books. :S

Lady Glamis said...

By the way, I do love your cover for the book. Did you make that?

T. Anne said...

Sounds like my last Saturday.

Sarah Jensen said...

Man, I love this story!
:)

Danyelle said...

It's funny this should be the excerpt. Breathing and moving do hurt right now. :$

Kimberly said...

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Valerie Wangnet said...

All the best with your novel. It is very nice to meet you.

Regards,
Valerie