Thursday, May 21, 2009

Illusions Mini Excerpt

Silence hit. The silence of quickened heartbeats and ragged breaths.

3 comments:

Tess said...

oooo - I like it. I'm spooked by two tiny sentences. excellent.

Cindy said...

"Silence hit." Oh, it sounds so forceful and definite. Cool!

Danyelle said...

Very nice!