Thursday, August 27, 2009

Illusions Mini Excerpt

“I don’t get you.” He brushed a hand through his hair. “You climb cliffs and attack strangers without blinking. But one little rat has you screaming like a girl.”

“I am a girl, in case you hadn’t noticed.”

“Yeah. I noticed.” He bit his bottom lip, then turned his head as he rubbed at the back of his neck.

She didn't know if he was hiding a smirk, but wanted to deck him anyway. Just in case.


Diane said...

Sounds intriquing. I would continue reading..... :O)

Lady Glamis said...

He does a lot of stuff with his hands. He strikes me as nervous, and I'm tensing some great tension here. :D

T. Anne said...

OK, where's the rest?

Loved it. :)